Character Development Secrets - 7 Steps to Developing Real People -
Part 2
by Corey Blake
Part Two: Creating the Past and Shaping the Present
The quality of your characters will form the foundation you desire
for a strong story. In this four-part series, we're looking at ways
to develop three-dimensional, dynamic, story driving characters. Using
the following seven-step framework, you can develop rich, complex, and
multi-dimensional individuals:
1) Label their desire essences
2) Label their fear essences
3) Get specific about their past
4) Label their behavior
5) Raise their stakes
6) Don't meddle in their lives
7) Let them play
In the previous article, we looked at the first two steps in this process:
1. Label their desire essences and 2. Label their fear essences.
In this installment, we'll explore your characters' backstories - where
they came from - and then determine how their histories shape their
behaviors. As we continue to the next two steps, you'll take a great
leap in crafting your characters into engaging parts of your story.
3. Get specific with your backstory
Human behavior is made up of a string of moments and the reactions
to those moments. A character's present is carved out by her past. Current
behavior is a battle between fear and desire, and your character's immediate
choices are based on very specific (yet unconscious) experiences from
her past ? experiences that leave imprints much like DNA. Though your
characters should be unconscious of these past experiences that have
influenced them, you the writer must create these histories in your
preparation of their backstory and be fully aware of them before you
move into your manuscript or screenplay. Here is an example of what
won't benefit you versus what will when you get specific with backstory.
Bad example of getting specific: Rachel is a pretty girl who thinks
she is unattractive. She prefers to live in her books as opposed to
being with friends or family. Her father abused her sexually throughout
her youth. She hates attention.
Better example of getting specific: On her graduation day, at a party
her mother is throwing for her, Rachel's father shows up drunk and congratulates
her, hugging her too closely, grabbing her rear end with both hands,
and calling her pretty in front of a room full of her friends and family.
She runs away humiliated and hides in her room, escaping into one of
her fantasy stories. That night she moves out to stay with a friend
and doesn't tell anyone where she is going. Two weeks later she finds
out through another friend that her father died in a car accident. He
was drunk.
In the better example of getting specific, the reader can have a visceral
reaction to the words. This is caused by the detail. The generality
of the bad reaction is logical, but lifeless. In the better example,
it is easy to determine what the essences of our leading lady might
be: desire to hide, maybe even desire to die, desire to live in her
books, desire to be valued for her intellect instead of her body, fear
of loneliness, fear of her appearance, fear of the opposite sex, fear
of losing a loved one, fear of being abandoned, fear of people who drink.
4. Describe their current behavior
Take the essences and the specific examples you have created and determine
what kind of behavior your character might exhibit as a result of their
past.
Simple example: Our leading lady - a woman who hides her body, avoids
friends from her past, mistrusts anyone who comments favorably on her
appearance, desires to control her education and her intellect, and
avoids alcohol.
In the next installment of this four-part series, you'll put your characters
into action and let them come to life.
In the meantime writers, keep your rear in the chair, your fingers
on the keys, and your writing reaching for the stars.
Corey Blake is President of Writers of the Round Table Inc., a unique
literary development and author management company that assists best-selling
authors, directors, executives, business owners, magazines, publishers
and producers in crafting significant written works and bringing them
to market.